Colour Poetry
The World of Green
Green is the sight of the leaves and trees throughout the streets and the forests.
The fresh air that you breathe and the flowers aroma that creates a smile are the scents of green.
Peas, cabbage and lettuce are some of what green tastes like.
The feeling of having a new born in your arms and the feeling of painting the sunset are the color green.
The sound of the birds chirping happily while the calm breeze flows through the sky, these are the sounds of green..The exotic wilderness and nature are green.
St Patrick’s day incorporates with green.
Most of this planet is covered with green.
Climbing trees and lying on grass fields are different activities involving green.
Trustworthiness and honesty represents the world of green and without it, there wouldn’t
be anyone to trust.
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Green is the colour of spring. I really liked this poem. Spring in Canada is one of the most anticipated seasons because our winter is so long and cold.
Mr. Harbeck
Sargent Park School
Winnipeg Canada
Hey Jayden..
I think that you did really well will this piece of writing. You had some very good ideas and you organised them really well. One thing I think you could have done is use some more desriptive words to help make the piece more interesting for the reader. Try and extend your vocab a bit, but other than that GOOD JOB.